I want to take the time to thank the readers who have sent me comments on the excerpt. I appreciate it. Currently I don't need anyone to let me know about typos and grammar errors (I know they're there!), but I do wish to hear about what you think of the characters, plot, and how the excerpt "flows". As a custom furniture maker I actually have enjoyed the process of collaboration with my clients. With writing, you - my readers - are my clients!
While I won't be making willy nilly changes to my overall plot, nor to my characters, it is important to me that my audience enjoy themselves and are engaged with what I write. So feel free to drop me a note and tell me what you think (don't feel you have to just say the "nice" things either, I managed to survive my Drill Instructors at MCRD, San Diego and their vociferous criticism helped to shape me into a rather decent Marine).
The best way to send those comments to me is by email through my contact page. I will respond to every message I get!